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Aurinko nousee. (landscape), väliin hetkittäisiä flashbackeja psykoeffyistä, joissa rotatoivia&zoomaavia bitmappeja.. (pohtii bileitä)

Landscape morphaa vartaloksi, kova biitti. Päätä särkee. Pohtii mitä on tapahtunut. Vaipuu kokonaan takaisin uneen=blur/fade/voxelläsähdys...

Unessa lisää pohdintaa, erilaisia efektejä taustalle, mm. Effy2 jonka taustalla vilahtelee `merkityksekäs kuva'. Väliin taas vartaloa.. mÃllyy eri tavalla ja pään kuva tulee päälle.

Herää, huomaa että kaikki on hyvin.

Teksti:

I woke up momentarily, as the sun was rising. (que landscape). I was still in a state of half-sleeping, half-awakeness, dreamy images of last night's party flashing in my field of vision. (pskyko effects) My head was pounding. I turned my eyes from the scenery outside to the situation at hand. (que woman)

I tried to think solidly. What actually happened yesterday? Was I even in my own bed, was the woman beside me the one I loved, or had I screwed up once more? I tried to make it all out, but could not. My vision blurred, and I fell back into a deep sleep (blur&fade).

I still had some control over myself when the dream images came. Even as the lighshow of my dream-visions bewildered me, I started to think back on last night and my life in general. Why was I doing this? I had a home, comfort, safety, a girl by my side. Why did I want so bad to get away from this all? Why was I keeping this company I kept, why was I at every sleezy party where I could get drunk and maybe laid by a complete stranger?

The woman came back to my dream, as if to bawk at me. (que womansmothered) Her forms were clear, but that was all. I saw my girlfriend, pictured on her body, so unreal, so frightening.. There was only one question in my mind. I had to wake up, I had to find out. But I could not. The woman left me to rest once again, falling into particles, flowing into the nothingness of deep space. For a moment, I felt calm, but then once more, my psyche hit me with images of my girlfriend, distorted by the dream, horrible. I was burning for my sins, a word etched with a hot iron into the front of my head: traitor.

I woke up, sweating, almost screaming aloud in horror, but I managed to swallow it, so as not to wake whoever was beside me.

At last I could look up at her face. Joy filled me, as I gently hugged her sleeping body, and then just held her in my arms...

Korjattu käsikirjoitus

1. Aurinko nousee. (landscape), väliin hetkittäisiä flashbackeja psykoeffyistä, joissa rotatoivia&zoomaavia bitmappeja.. (pohtii bileitä)

2. Landscape morphaa vartaloksi, kova biitti. Päätä särkee. Pohtii mitä on tapahtunut. [KT_ADD -> viime ilta ehkä diskossa?] Vaipuu kokonaan takaisin uneen=blur/fade/voxelläsähdys...

3. Unessa lisää pohdintaa, erilaisia efektejä taustalle, mm. Effy2 jonka taustalla vilahtelee 'merkityksekäs kuva'. Väliin taas vartaloa.. mÃllyy eri tavalla ja pään kuva tulee päälle.

4. Herää, huomaa että kaikki on hyvin.

Teksti:

I woke up momentarily, as the sun was rising. (que landscape). I was still in a state of half-sleeping, half-awakeness, dreamy images of last night's party flashing in my field of vision. (pskyko effects) My head was pounding. I turned my eyes from the scenery outside to the situation at hand. (que woman)

I tried to think solidly. What actually happened yesterday? Was I even in my own bed, was the woman beside me the one I loved, or had I screwed up once more? I tried to make it all out, but could not. My vision blurred, and I fell back into a deep sleep (blur&fade).

[KT_CHG -> I totally lost control as the dreams penetrated my consciousness as weel as subconscious.

The philosophical crap I usually don't care so much about took over my dreams. -> why was I... ?]

I still had some control over myself when the dream images came. Even as the lighshow of my dream-visions bewildered me, I started to think back on last night and my life in general. Why was I doing this? I had a home, comfort, safety, a girl by my side. Why did I want so bad to get away from this all? Why was I keeping this company I kept, why was I at every sleezy party where I could get drunk and maybe laid by a complete stranger?

The woman came back to my dream, as if to bawk at me. (que womansmothered) Her forms were clear, but that was all. I saw my girlfriend, pictured on her body, so unreal, so frightening.. There was only one question in my mind. I had to wake up, I had to find out. But I could not. The woman left me to rest once again, falling into particles, flowing into the nothingness of deep space. For a moment, I felt calm, but then once more, my psyche hit me with images of my girlfriend, distorted by the dream, horrible. I was burning for my sins, a word etched with a hot iron into the front of my head: traitor.

[KT_CHG -> que tendlu this is to be left untexted for max. effect]

I woke up, sweating, almost screaming aloud in horror, but I managed to swallow it, so as not to wake whoever was beside me.

At last I could look up at her face. Joy filled me, as I gently hugged her sleeping body, and then just held her in my arms...

[KT_CHG -> She mumbled sleepily, "what is it now?" My joy came overwhelming as I answered, "You were just so pretty asleep."]